Tippin the scale
life or fairy tales
hittind the mark
you fingers spark
Blushing, moaning
wanting more
leave you panting
on the floor
Treambling body
pleause explodes
tasting tracing
fingers intwine
He screams out
your name
teasing going sain
Blushing, moaning
wanting more
leave you panting
on the floor
making love not lust
because lust is not
enough
because he holds
my heart so tenderly
only ment to be
only because he can make
me
Blushing, moaning
wanting more
leave you panting
on the floor
on the bed
on the wall
on the floor
my heart wants him
my body needs to fell
the passion
that he heeds
on the wall
to the bed wanting
more leave me begging
on the floor!
A contest entry
- Vanilla and Chocolate - a Sensual Confection by dance11.
1000 points, ended April 20, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what did you think?
Comments
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Omg! :S
*goosebumps* -
Thank you for your entry! However, the piece is filled with typos and does not conform to the contest paramenters of using sugary/candied language.
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very hot. very erotic. even, dare i say, turned me on? yup. it's good alright. best erotic piece i've read on the site so far
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That left me wanting more fantasic
Keep up the good work
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