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I'm being stretched and soon I'll break
I'm only so flexible baby
I'm only so flexible
My heart might just separate.

My future is unclear
I don't have a damn clue
I don't have a clue
I need you here.

Costs, are more than I have to show
no money in my pockets baby
no money in my pockets
and I don't know where to go

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  • Kelli Marie
    March 3, 2008

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    I think this is a nice write. They are almost lyrical. You did a great job with this piece of poetry. Very good.
    Kelli