Unlike anyone else, so unique it surprises myself,
Stubborn yet thoughtful, sassy but reliable,
Does she have what it takes?
Contains and holds the power and the strength,
But she'll hide, and gather herself,
Unleash her unbearable potential,
Just let go, just believe, that's all you need,
Free to the soul, unchained, let loose to unroll,
Chanted Venus attracts and mesmerizes all,
And they will fall on their knees, begging for a shot please,
Consumes elegance, and grace along with her stunning face,
Impacts and effects your path,
Therefore leaving her own trace behind to remember,
The fire in her heart burns and flickers into others, It stays alive,
Sealed down, she is the one to be found,
Her emotion is shown as she is free-spoken,
Soon to reveal and express her passion to those,
yet to be uncovered and discovered,
She holds the key, unlock the mysteries so we can see,
Those blue eyes play a bittersweet melody, fierce and soft,
So unfold that closed envelope, allow her to write her own letter,
That will occupy your own heart to open hers.
A contest entry
- March New Members contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended April 8, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Welcome to allpoetry and thanks for entering!
Thank you for sharing with us the importance of this person and the beauty in their heart, it is a special thing to show others. I feel that you could have put their relationship to you in the author notes.
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
I hope you enjoy allpoetry
Faerie
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Thank you for your entry and Welcome to allpoetry
A few words that didn't fit, such as umbearable potential. I think a better word choice might have been unimaginable. Otherwise very powerful in statement. Thanks for sharing
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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Welcome to AllPoetry
Like Gaylene I was unsure whom this was for but I am pleased you added in the comments that it is for your best friend, you may wish to add that part to your Authors Notes [if you are unsure how to do so, ask a Greeter anytime
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Wonderful write.
♥
Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Welcome to AllPoetry
Wow, this is such a sweet poem to dedicate to your friend... quite inspirational. I'm sure she'd appreciate it a lot. Good luck in the contest
~Diana
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sorry this a poem i wrote to my best friend, who always seems to be lost in life but shes the greatest person i know
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Welcome to Allpoetry
This is a very beautiful poem with lovely imagery. However I am not sure who this is dedicated to and reading through could not find who this was written about.
Thanks so much for entering our contest
Gaylene
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