Sky blue horizons whipped with pink billowy clouds.
It dazzles my mind as I soar across the sky.
Mesmerized by nature's beauty, I give thanks to God
who created Cotton Candy Skies.
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Outstanding!
This was Brilliant!
"Mesmerized by nature's beauty, I give thanks to God who created Cotton Candy Skies."
This was short, but said a lot, I can just imagine this beautiful imagery.
Great Job!
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that was really really good!!!!
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WOW!
That sounds like cotton candy and makes me hungry!i am Dianne's great niece Alyssa.That is very very wonderful and beautiful! -
Ah! It reminded me about the first time ...
that I actually traveled by airoplane ... Wow! Those clouds, sparkling sun! It was a wondrous feeling. I just LOVED God for making me see it from a HIGHER perspective -- no pun intended LOL.
Loved to read this.
Take care,
Myra
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BRILLIANT
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! I have also used cotton candy skies in a write somehere along the way. We must share the same brain!lol I also, give thanks to GOD, the ultimate artist. You have superbly mixed an awesome piece of poetic art with your pallette of royal vocabulary! I LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!
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short sweat and simple. Nice write. too the point.
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COTTTON CANDY SKIES, BRINGS NICE THINGS INTO MY MIND, THANKS I NEEDED THAT ( :
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Hi Bobbie!
I LOVE this. It is so cheerful and the images are sharp.
*Suggestions*
You don't need 'any' punctuation. It is already
flying.
I wouldn't use the capitalized 'cotton candy skies'
either.
A beauty! Let me feature this for you and see what
others think.
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