It Just Might Work..

I’m not perfect doll
I will never clamed to be
But I love to smile and love to scream
I’m one of a kind just amazing
Then I meet you and I see
Your no where near perfect
You never shall be,
You to be crazy wild and scream
Must say your pretty amazing!
It may just work, maybe just maybe
Your smile is amazing it lights up a room
Your voice makes me melt
Maybe it might just work
So we give it a try
And baby I think its going to work
Not once have you made me cry;
Or made me question why[?]
Dang but you caught me!!
When I didn’t even want to be found
You picked me up from off the ground
You gave me love nothing less
You make me feel amazing you put me through a test
I love you and I love what you do
Your crazy and dangerous but I love you!

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So i think he might just work..we will just have to see!

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poeticweaver
March 4, 2008
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Excellent Flow!
It just might work! I like this alot girl.. It has that lyrical flow to it.. and I enjoyed it lots, and found myself making my own melody to it. It just might work? It works for you, so, that's all that matters. I only wish you all the best, because you are the best! Much love and light~

-Timothy, aka Dad, Pops, poeticweaver~
maryg303
March 3, 2008

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I really liked this poem, it kinda sums up what I think a lot of people are thinking. Very good write!!
missrockstar
March 3, 2008
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aww its a pretty write
i hope it does
Jeremy0826
March 3, 2008

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This is great! It's a wonderful feeling
when you find someone that makes you feel
this way. Someone who appreciates you
for who you are inside and out. Beautiful
work here my friend and I really enjoyed
reading it. I hope that everything works
out for the both for you! Take care and
thanks a lot for sharing this piece here.
Keep up the wonderful work!
Xox ILY xoX
March 3, 2008
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Wow, that was amazing. I think my favorite part was this.
"When I didn’t even want to be found
You picked me up from off the ground
You gave me love nothing less"
I don't know, it just really fit in there.
I think it's a wonderful poem, and much luck to you on him. Haha. Hope it works. <3
InfiniteAbsolution
March 3, 2008

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this is cute, i really liked it. I feel the same way about someone right now, and its amazing eh? I dont usually read or write anything happy, but things change. Awesome write. <3
Dead Star--x
March 3, 2008

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i like this♥ my bf makes me feel like this-well not as much lately but theres a glimmer of hope
i hope this works out for you♥
Dead Star--x