you stabed my heart,
and ripped it in two;
i never thought,
i would fall in love with you,
i never felt,
the way i feel now,
and without you by my side,
i don't know what to do,
i'm going crazy,
all because,baby,...i love you.
Author notes
this poem is about a guy that goes to my school. i've been his girlfriend before, but so much for that lasting, now he is one of my best friends boyfriend. and i really miss him. a lot!
what did you think about my poem
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yea i kno where you comin from sis i finally give my heart to sum1 since well brittney n it got torn to shreds n thrown back at me n they say its better to have loved n lost then to nvr have loved at all but id rather not have my heart forever broke you kno jus once i wish tht when sum1 says the love me to they mean it nice write though sis love you
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oops i meant babygirl. lol
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kool
it turned out really good. i love you baby!!!
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really good
i know exactly what you mean in this poem
maybe you could change the layout and put the i love you on the next line down but i dont know if that would make it look better
besides i dont think the layout matters because the content is good
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