Softly flows my love
as I look deep into your eyes
inching closer, seeking the solace
of soft, melancholy sighs
Author notes
20 words exactly
In a list
A contest entry
- 20 Words by Perfectly Imperfect.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Such a beautiful expression in so few words I love this. Well done and thank you very much for your entry x
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soft melanchloy sighs awww xx
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oh this is so beautiful. the softness and gentle flow in your words made me sigh with a smile. they capture such a beautiful love with your words, ne that I am sure many would love to have or can already relate to. well done mummy you always inspire me
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