Parts of you, surging high
in pursuit of what's not seen.
Your desire to melt all in your way,
Your never ending urge to breathe,
never to be satisfied...
You're blazing through and through.
The warmth that you embody;
your aura all red.
Orange and yellow flames that you are,
putting gold to test.
You travel far and wide, you do,
leaving behind your trail.
How I adore your silent charm,
the way your flames sashay,
the quietly raging storm that you are,
your charisma shall be lauded today.
You burn in all of us, I know
You keep us all humane.
A contest entry
- NATURE POEMS, PLEASE by Olivias Violin.
400 points, ended July 8, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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Very Good
Fire is fascinating.
I have never read a poem about it that I can recall,
so I applaud your originality. Also, this is very well written
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