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A Comfort, Beyond The Realm of Dreams

I am not sure.
Never was, no, never again to be.
A mistake of mine, perhaps,
pulled from a long forgotten memory.

Did I really see?
I could swear it was her there.
My childhood pet, gone so long.
The lines of reality blurred in my eyes.

Sweet little dog, yes,
my dearest confidante.
I cried, ready to believe
that she had been returned to me.

She heard me
as she always had in life.
Came to me, placed her head in my hands.
A feeling of comfort, of relief.

I sat with her a while
spilling my soul on the ground.
A time when I needed her the most,
she was there.

All I know is, I slept.
And awoke far later, alone once more.
I ask myself, is this imaginary?
But the comfort was beyond the realm of dreams.

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  • Headx1stForHalos
    March 13, 2008

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    is this about sophie? awww little buddy, its so beautiful! i love you it so much! i alose love you so much! XDDDD <3333


  • Ethereal One gold member
    March 7, 2008

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    beautiful

    This is such an emotion filled poem. Pets become part of the family, and I can relate to the love you had for your dog.
    You express your experience so well in this poem, and I especially like:

    "She heard me
    as she always had in life.
    Came to me, placed her head in my hands.
    A feeling of comfort, of relief.

    I sat with her a while
    spilling my soul on the ground.
    A time when I needed her the most,
    she was there."

    Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!

    Etherel One