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Prayer

Prayers from a broken heart,
seeking you O'Merciful.
My whole life is torn apart,
and I've no more tricks to pull.!

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    March 4, 2008

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    Please refer to the format of Harrisham Rhyme and edit your poem accordingly.
    I will come back to comment on your poem.