I am sometimes rude, and I have anger issues.
I love my sister and my family, but if someone approaches me about it,
I play like I could care less.
I am simply me, and I wouldn't have it any other way.
I get confused when I think of all the things that surround me:
the drug abuse, the death and stench of fear.
I live in my own little world,
trying to escape from this world so nobody can change me.
I want to remain in my world until I can find a way to survive in a world
where violence is normal and happiness is rare.
I want to be me while still being accepted,
and not conforming to other people's views of me.
I am simply me and that will never change if I have anything to say about it.
Author notes
i would like to be your sister because you seem like a cool person and have the same thoughts as i do about abortion and i like helping others but let it e about me and i have no clue what i want to do.
A contest entry
- **[[EPIPHANY ABOUT LOVE]]** by punksense.
400 points, ended March 8, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - AP FAMILY STARTING by forever and ever.
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nice to meet you hun. and i'd love to have you as my sister.
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YAY!!!!!! but is it ok for the contest? does it follow what u wanted?
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yea, it's fine.
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ok thankss! oh crap there's the bell to leave for home! g2g ill b on 2 morrow
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Hmmm, this is interesting prose piece. I think that when you speak of "the fear and stench of fear," it is too repetitive. Keep the "stench of fear" part, but replace "the fear" with something else that is equally gripping. My favorite line is, "a world / where violence is normal and happiness is rare." Beautiful.
It's great that you can hold onto yourself like that :] Keep it up, because when you find that you like yourself, it's just so great...DON'T LOSE IT!
Good luck!
Jen >_<
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