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Allure

 

Try as I might,
your spell inescapable
Lured by your eyes,
drawn to you essence

Driven ever deeper,
into submission

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  • Perfectly Imperfect
    March 4, 2008

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    This is good, I like what you've expressed Well done and thanks for entering x

    [Should it perhaps be "your essence"?]

  • Aisades
    March 3, 2008

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    wow

    This is very expressive and emotionally potent. So few words describe so much. This poem demonstrates heavy and concentrated feelings. Just wow. Good luck.