Leaping through the clovers
on his merry way,
the leprechaun is happy,
on this St. Patrick's Day.
He tripped over a pebble
and landed on his face,
he lost his po' o' gold,
it spilled all o'er the place.
He got up off the ground
put his hands on his hips,
his pipe fell ou' o' his mouth,
he had a pout upon his lips.
"I lost me po' o' gold
all o'er the place,
because o' the damn pebble,
me landed on me face."
He bent o'er to
pick up his riches,
his pants fell down,
out came the stitches.
"Ta, ta, te, ta, ta, ti,
now me is pissed off,
me arse is a showin',
me temper is aloft."
"Me ain't very happy,
I lost me po' o' gold,
me pipe fell on the ground,
me feelin' o so old."
"Bending o'er is hard
on me back,
me is goin' ta pull up me pants,
so me can hide me crack."
Mar.17/2004
A contest entry
- #50 St. Patrick's Day by daviscth.
500 points, ended March 5, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Silver trophy winner
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Bronze trophy winner
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Thank you for the entry but you forgot two things.
"RULE" no foul language.
You didn't mark which Trophy you were entering this for. -
very very cute thanks for entering
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What a Laugh
Thank you so much for entering. One of my rules was no foul language but for this one I will make an exception since this is an Irish Leprechaun and the Irish are known for their tempers. I know I have one.
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My word!!!
I think this is the best rhyming poem I have come across in a long time.....not to mention the story iside of your masterpiece ~
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So much Imagery and focus on your Theme....Loved it!!!
Good luck to you and your entry,
Bear ~
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lol - this is so cute. A delight to read...great wording, read nicely, great images and funny.
best wishes in your contest.
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LMao if this does not win I am going to have to check cathys head lol this is greAT LMAO here hahahaha! other then the laughter the rhyme was awsome and the write spectacular! I love how you got the words so that as you read it you hear as if it were the lepr. himself wonderful write!
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LOL. Now this is a wonderful poem for my favorite green holiday!! Thanks so much for posting in my contest!
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