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a I L

I always live in life
a life including lies
and also love
and improvise
I always laugh
I always love
laziness
and lonesome
are always lacked
I live like a lion
loud and large
and in love
In an igloo
I live like a lizard
long and lanky
also in love

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    Great alliteration in these lines, a i and l words rebound all over the place here. Not quite like a tongue twister, but getting there.


  • KayJay
    March 15, 2008

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    I appreciate alliteration - it always brings a smile.
    It will cure what's aILling you, at least for a while.
    Nice work!
    Ken


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    March 15, 2008
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    Nice job.


  • xXgabbybearXx
    March 4, 2008
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    nice i liked it keep uip the good work


  • takemypainaway
    March 3, 2008
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    i like this very nice poem

    love the letter choise

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