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Our Caribbean Love

Away my hot heart lifts like steam,
We're swinging to a musical dream,
My bare legs smoothly grazing yours,
This aura I've never sensed before.
The ocean licks its coral teethe,
Tasting the sand from underneathe,
We refresh our feet in its cool tongue,
And hear it breathe from its core lung.
On this low-hung hammock, here we lay,
Heartbeats rhythmic to the ocean's sway,
Yet all among this picturesque wonder,
My attention has been fully plundered,
I'm focused solely on your presence,
Since it seems to be of luminescence.
Your glow fulfills me with affection,
Envelops me with your protection,
A beacon on this evening so dim,
Motivated by nothing but a whim,
You shine even when we're not alone,
Your strong arms are what I call home.
I imagine of us in a Paradise land,
Sun-drenched in our bed of sand,
An ocean so blue, a sky so clear,
Our own perfect, private atmosphere.
Your vibrance stronger than the tide,
Fierce passion sizzling from inside,
The ocean chokes and then hits death,
Releases a gasp for one last breath.
Now it's silent and remains calm,
As we saunter to a leaning palm,
Some light escapes the sun's wrath,
Drawn in the sea, its trickled path.
Just when I thought it the greatest stun,
I saw you against the tropical sun,
Without a doubt, existed no contest,
You became the reward that you possessed.
We dodge the world and its mess chaotic,
Impulsively travel to somewhere exotic,
Amid our peace, sparks the stimulation,
To venture out and grant appreciation.
Explore the plush jungles all surrounding,
Answer the unknown echoes still resounding,
Then return to our spacious, golden sauna,
Maybe we've finally achieved Nirvana.
Toasted skin under our untamed hair,
Smile against the warm blowing air,
Unforgettable moments here in this place,
Always reminded by your unforgettable face.






Avi--I love you, please always remember that.
I wish I could come with you to Trinidad. You have no idea how much I think about going with you and how much fun it'd be. Hope you like this.
Always & Forever, Janna



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This is dedicated to my love, Avinash.

And for the contest: my username is Out of Town Girl, spaces, not underscores.

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  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    March 4, 2008
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    Wow....such a refeshing piece.....very calm and soothing...

    I loved the background color...