Through the darkest skies
Starry glimmer shines
From the covers of lies
Never far is the truth
…Shadows of night guide our path
To a morning bliss
For a miracle is wished upon falling stars
…One came true, I live to witness
The Perfect picture of life
…Life, I’m blessed to live
Author notes
That's what the picture of galaxy whispers to me.
I copied the image from the contest page. So, thanks to Peteskid...
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A contest entry
- Big ideas...small words by Peteskid.
600 points, ended March 3, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Invite For... Silver winners Judged by RedwingSpirit.
475 points, ended April 4, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites Mania by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 84 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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There's is an overwhelming sense of many reveries flowing throughout this write. While one ponders the mysteries, another goes in search for the answers to the unknowing questions -
*wonderful style here, poetic emphasis in repetition Life works so very well, wonderful strong voice and humility in the sight of such overwhelming night skies...PK
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Thanks PK
I truly appreciate your comment - a boost for my poetic ego
(lol) ... Its really appreciated you taking time and explaining with perfect one liners why each poetry won the trophy it did - it shows you go beyond the words on screen - you dive deep behind the words... thanks again for applauds & giving me a chance to be part of your contest... Thanks again for trophy... take care Minoo
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'Shadows of night guide our path
to a morning bliss'
The continula cycle of life
yes it fits the prompt well and describes much in a few words
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Thanks Hun
Thanks hun for your time.. I appreciate you stopping by to read and leave a sweet comment... I'm glad you enjoyed reading this poem.. Thanks for applauds too.. take care Minoo
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this was a very good write strong ending thanks for sharing regards zaj
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Thanks Zyskandar
Thanks a lot for your time... I appreciate you reading and leaving such a nice comment... I'm glad you liked it.. thanks again for applauds.. take care Minoo
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Lovely thoughts and sentiments expressed so well in these lines. Great take on the picture served to inspire writers in this contest.
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Thank you
Thank you so much for clicking and leaving a comment
... its much appreciated.. thank you for your support and time... I'm glad you liked it.. thanks again... take care Minoo
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