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I love you!!

I look in your big brown eyes and see the pain about to overflow.
You fall into my arms and I try to comfort you the best way i can.

I tell you how much I love you, and how important to the world you are. I can only hope its enough to soothe you, to make things better.

I left your head and wipe away the tears that have streaked your face, you asure me you will be ok.
I sure hope so, afterall you are my world. I love you!!

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    April 28, 2008
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    Very nice work here

    Very discriptive and with the showing of such love indeed


  • bleedingheart91
    March 28, 2008

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    CUTE! Heehee. It reminds me of a qoute. "You may be one person to the world, but you can be the world to one person" ^-^ Nice nice


  • CanadianGirl1
    March 24, 2008
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    aww.. this is so sweet... Great Write!


  • Tom The Invader
    March 3, 2008

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    This brings back memories, rather frustrating ones at that. You manage to pack alot of meaning and emotions into these few lines. Well done!