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lovelight



amber feelings grow

love ordained by tendresse knows

softly you become

A contest entry

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  • BellaD
    March 3, 2008
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    Lovely haiku

    Very original wording. Love the last line.


  • MyDecember
    March 3, 2008
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    i love


  • sunny day
    March 3, 2008

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    What a wonderful haiku you have penned on the feelings of a growing love. The metaphor is perfect as a light shining is like that of true love. All three lines are excellent and filled with such beautiful imagery. Thank you for sharing your gift with all of us and best wishes for you in the contest. It sounds as golden as the light/love. Love and God bless you, Joyce