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Broken Sky

The sky is dark cracked and broken,
a shower of rain comes pouring down,
like tears showering from heaven,
this is just a lonely town.

Depression is my one and only companion,
the one who is always there for me,
he takes my dreams and all my passion,
I feel I will never be complete.

Death and darkness is all around me,
tears are rolling down my cheek,
I look inside and search for answers,
it is all the same week on week.

So I am left alone once again,
crying for all I have lost,
I curl myself up and keep on sobbing,
I'm always left counting the cost.

Because nothing is left here for me,
of all the good things that seem to happen.
none seem to happen to me.

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    This is a great piece that you have penned here I love it simply amazing congrats on the Hm best wishes and much love


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    *wipes tear away* this is so well written, I love the last stanza especially... amazing. Thank you so much for entering, best of luck. xxx