I feel the Caribbean glow,
somewhere in my soul,
I sense beginning
Of the annual festival;
expectant ''primavera"
trees about to commence
Shimmering yellow bells
ringing, blossoming;
briefly and brightly
Like a million starbursts
reflecting wonderful light
onto flat suburban land.
This, the fleeting horizon between
dryness and the humid intensity
of subtropical summer.
Author notes
http://www.mgonlinestore.com/YTab/yellowtab02.jpg
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- Everyday Beauty....... by GodsTrueSoldier.
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hmm Very nice =D thansk for enetring!
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shimmering yellow bells
ringing, blossoming;
briefly and brightly.
beautifully descriptive and the alliteration aids the flow superbly
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I've always loved these trees.
Hope your week is off to a good start
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I feel the carribbean glow somewhere in my soul, beautiful imagery,stunning my friend God bless
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Thank you so much
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