The house we lived in was
quite small not enough room for
me to do it all
I just felt every wall
circuling my jaw
if i even crunched
a square would hunch
across my face
where no one knows
the black that winds behind
the magic thatso stupidly
wipes itself across my face
a pregenerated emotion
all behind my devotion
you're crazy if you
think i'm gone
i'll stick around for
one more song
no scars this time
just a crack in
what was my mind
and all in my stomach
making my heart plummet
to god knows where...
It's you that didn't care
as I washed up your underwear
and saw everything
and didn't care
It was you that wasn't there
you're silliness
and my forgetfulness
not even a slight bliss
I just couldn't smoke
one more kiss
But you're aware and
you've found it
while there are days
I still doubt it
I could wash it away
in a fountain
but still i'm not done
I just wanna ride in fun
cruise, let go, and
blow away another day
I wanna be care free
don't even bother
there is no other
and insecurities
you never were
quite sore of me
until
I was gone.
What did you think
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I would like to see consistency in capitalizing "I" in your stanzas. My favorite was definitely the 2nd one. I loved the phrase, "a pregenerated emotion," but I do wonder if you meant "impregnated." However, what does this have to do with the contest subject matter? Please resubmit or explain.
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oh and yes i did mean pregenerated..
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thanks um.. isn't the contest about love or something?
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You tell me...did you read the contest?
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