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Oath of a Soldier

"I am a soldier
An Army of One
Defending my country
With fathers and sons
For personal honor
Patriot pride
Giving my all
Everyday do-or-die
I stand for the people
For freedom and rights
To all opposition
Surrender or fight
Bounded by oath
I have given my word
To rise to the call
Protect and serve"

Signed "God Bless America,
Our battle is won!"
Thirty-eight cents ma'am
We honor your son.

Author notes

Mythology assignment, we had to write about our heros. Going army myself soon I saw it appropriate.

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  • kool k
    April 25

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    soldier or not we thank all for letting every country free. great writing. i was going to join the army or navy but i wont now cause they are too many young kids joining.

  • BornWithAPen
    March 16

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    more respect than words

    powerful stuff young man, and all the respect i have, and how amazing it would be if you kept that oath regardless of whats happening around you, so many dont, but i feel you will.
    Michael

  • This is really good. I liked it and it gave such a strong message. Great job!!

  • Its not as good as some of your other stuff. It seems much too simple for what I have grown to know as your work. You should always give your all, even if its only for an assignment. Keep writing.
  • It was good hope you got a good grade on it

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