Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Oath of a Soldier

"I am a soldier
An Army of One
Defending my country
With fathers and sons
For personal honor
Patriot pride
Giving my all
Everyday do-or-die
I stand for the people
For freedom and rights
To all opposition
Surrender or fight
Bounded by oath
I have given my word
To rise to the call
Protect and serve"

Signed "God Bless America,
Our battle is won!"
Thirty-eight cents ma'am
We honor your son.

Author notes

Mythology assignment, we had to write about our heros. Going army myself soon I saw it appropriate.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 7 of 7

  • YesterdaysDreams
    December 3, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Bounded by oath


    should be /bound to an oath ...

    This is close to home. I lost a friend to this blasted war, He left behind a wife and a 3 month old baby. Some dont really think about what soldiers are leaving behind to protect our country... sometimes what they never get to come back too.


  • LovingAngelForever
    October 29, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Awesome job on this... I love it, you did a great job.


  • kel dog
    April 25, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    soldier or not we thank all for letting every country free. great writing. i was going to join the army or navy but i wont now cause they are too many young kids joining.


  • BornWithAPen
    March 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    more respect than words

    powerful stuff young man, and all the respect i have, and how amazing it would be if you kept that oath regardless of whats happening around you, so many dont, but i feel you will.
    Michael


  • XxKillerxXLettexX
    March 5, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    This is really good. I liked it and it gave such a strong message. Great job!!


  • Paper-bag Chic
    March 4, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Its not as good as some of your other stuff. It seems much too simple for what I have grown to know as your work. You should always give your all, even if its only for an assignment. Keep writing.


  • Slavetoheartbreak
    March 3, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    It was good hope you got a good grade on it

1 - 7 of 7