... A gun shot whisper in the dark.
& then the needle plunges deep
Deeper than the shattered heap of your body can take any more.
Are you feeling lonely yet
In that crowded room of vultures?
Are you feeling ugly yet
In this melting pot of cultures?
... A lie told by an honest shark.
& then the ropes burn your skin raw
The intensity is more than you could have imagined in your sleep.
Are you feeling lonely yet
In that crowded room of vultures?
Are you feeling ugly yet
In this melting pot of cultures?
This won't hurt a bit.
Of course not.
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insightful
Jess this is a good peice of writing! reminds me of that point you get to just before you hit oblivian when you drink too much to forget whats going on around you! It also reminds me of trying to be perfect and fit in with the crowd or being in a busy place and feeling you just dont belong. well done honey! you are a fantastic writer xxxxxxxx cheryl
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