My other side can be quite devilish
i cannot control her; you see
no matter how strong the ropes are
she finds a way to break free
Molly can be harsh
and doesn't control the things she says
doesn't filter the cruelty
the goodness I have, she decays
Molly undos all the good i do
all the happiness i can bring
and with her starts chaos
as her words contain a sting
Fortunately for now
I've got her at bay
but pray i can keep her out of sight
and out of harm's way
A contest entry
- Unleash Your Inner Psycho by infernalxfidelity.
380 points, ended March 5, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like this, it expresses the fact that not only you but everyone has an alter ego, wether it be good or bad, is another story all together, this is good, the flow could be better but the over all meaning makes up for that. good work
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I didn't really like the flow myself lol
glad you enjoyed it and could relate to it!
...xxx
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ah, i see. well, i need to judge soon, and i don't want to leave you out. i hope to read your poem soon!
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