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love reaffirmed (Senryu)

love reaffirmed
their differences
embraced

A contest entry

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    January 10

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    Wow. Great job. I have seen many different styles of writing, including haikus with no images. This is an excellent write.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • myron silver member
    March 5, 2008

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    Hmmmnn...haiku are composed of images. I can't really find any images in this one. It only seems to have statements. My learning has taught me that haiku need images.



  • stompsalot
    March 3, 2008
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    Very nice. "differences embraced." so simple and so sweet and true.
    blessings *stomps


  • Kelli Marie
    March 3, 2008

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    A very nicely written modern haiku. Love embrace. Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest.
    Kelli