'The one' you say,
you wanted him,
but that blond figure stayed as his shadow
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but i was there in your shadow,
crying, hoping you'll turn and notic me...
I wish....... the pain of loving someone when they love someone els,
knowing you have no love in return from them, bleeding your heart our for what?
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afraid of loosing you, i blame only my self
we fight like water on rocks crushing each others emotions,
hoping someone will just say sorry,
but full of emotion i become blank.....
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I can no longer feel your love if any,
i can no longer feel your touch if you love me,
i can no longer feel you here next to me as your drifting away,
nothing i can do about it but wait as you waited for me.....
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I don't want to leave you, i don't want to make you cay, I no longer say sorry if i don't mean it, and i mean it!, i don't want you to hurt or cry, butt what can i do when your locked away like a forbidden tresure.
i'm waiting here as you waited for me, waiting for the day i can see you when your close and i can hold you closer in my arms and promis you nothings going to happen, cause i'm allways here for you and will never leave your side for anything.
i love you so much xoxo.
A contest entry
- Love and Hurt by xofightinirishx3.
495 points, ended May 20, 2008, 26 entries
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i miss her
Comments
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Ten Points.
Hey Hippy =)
Wow ...
No three guesses what this one's about ... Your language skill is actually really great, you know how to twist emotions into words, it's pretty trippy.
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Lol. Keep at it, I love reading your stuff =D
Love you x
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Yeah i did cry.. i'm so sorry darling. i love you
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please em just think about what your doing to me..... if you love me then please show it, i love you forever
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aww hippy... this really almost made me cry. its so beautiful. "we fight like water on rocks crushing each others emotions"... thats such an amazing image and feeling. i love your writing! you express yourself so well. can i ask who its about...?
beautiful work hippy, whoever its about is very lucky indeed. xxx
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