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Running with Time

Ive tried my best
to kiss the lips of father time
but whenever my breathe draws near
the seconds click
with the sound of another turning gear
the minutes whip away
putting my sanity to the test
of living through another
speeding day.
learning only...
that time is uncatchable.

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  • Nikk
    March 10, 2008
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    I relate with this poem so well.
    Beautifully written and such meaning.


  • creationsfromheart
    March 3, 2008

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    this is a good write it will need to be left alligned as the ones on the front of the contest page to be in the book. Thank you for the entry and good luck.