Utopia
Turquoise green and blue painted watercolours.
Chestnut green mountain canvas,
nature’s brush exceeds man’s.
Tumbling,
gushing, crystal effusions
playing,
splashing,
children of the colours.
Forming reforming,
never stopping.
Touching this Utopia,
then ever onward.
Author notes
Link for pic used
http://neatorama.cachefly.net/images/2006-11/plitvicka-waterfalls.jpg
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A contest entry
- PICTURE INSPIRED CONTEST by Angelic Princess21.
900 points, ended March 4, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Eutopia, like perfection, is just a matter of perception. From behind these eyes you have masterfully melded them into twins
Joe
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very beautifully written hun. you have created a very different take on this picture. this is a very beautiful write. thank you for entering my contest and best of luck to you hun
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Wow Cin this is a fantastic write...."children of the colours"...what a fantabulous line....guess im trying for silver now huh....
Rob...
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Awwwww
*blushes* lol
I stand by my opinion of that I reckon yours is better lol...well all I can say is we both damn well better win something...cause we are just two brilliant poeple
Thanks darl, your kind words are always appreciated
Cin
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this is so beauitfully inspired fpicture auntie. your words pen so much and really brighten it up. your words hold alot of color in them. well done auntie I love you
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Aw thanks babey girl..A great comment, your comments always keep me writing more and more
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Aunty Cin
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