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Daylight delight

Missing image
Sharing time, food and wine
Memories back from when you were mine
The times we played on hot summer nights
Filled with all sorts of sensual delights

That night in the pool
Was just so cool
You swam past me, acting sweet
Touching me there you could feel the heat

Our bodies joined, they did at last unite
Underneath starry twilight
No-one around or so we thought
Another lesson that night I was taught

Swimming naked in a caravan park
Thinking we’re safe because it’s dark
Along came another swimmer that night
Her body was naked, oh what a sight

She joined us near the waters edge
Asked if she could step over the ledge
We told her that she looked real fine
And offered her a glass of wine

Taking that leap into the unknown
Not knowing her mind was about to be blown
You touched her neck and drew her near
And whispered sweetly into her ear

You told her what we wanted to do
And that it was both me and you
She came across in front of me
Opened her arms so that I could see

I leant into her arms that night
And tasted what was there on sight
Her nipples held between my teeth
As your hand slipped down underneath

We teased and pleased that lady well
All the while you started to swell
On the deck beside that pool
She straddled you, not acting the fool

My tongue tasted her while she rode
It wouldn’t take long and you did explode
Your juices mixed well together
To create a taste that will last me forever

Tongues teased, bodies entwined
Upon her luscious curves we dined
Lust was sated, we played all night
Totally fulfilled,  gone by daylight

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    March 5, 2008
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    Awesome HOT piece, loved it !!


  • lunarmist 53
    March 3, 2008

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    caravan parks - a new horizon.

    well Jen...,
    this one leaves everything to the imagination ...in a most vivid way.

    muccchly enjoyed..

    note to self..

    take up caravaning.


    alan.


  • ckwriter69
    March 3, 2008

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    Wow Jen you write such good hot sexy erotica. I loved the desricptive lustful images you have created. Good rhyming and form. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    March 3, 2008

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    Whew!

    What a very delisciously hot write..well done as always. Good to see you have not lost your touch.

    **Master Ktulu**


  • Tattboyspet
    March 3, 2008

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    oh my!!!!!!!!
    WONDERFUL Jen!!!!!!
    where's this pool, I wanna go swim there too!!!!

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