Twenty words...
used to describe a feeling.
can it be done?
Perhaps through metaphors,
perhaps similes...
I simply can not.
A contest entry
- 20 Words by Perfectly Imperfect.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lol. this is brilliant. i really like how you've done this.
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Thank you, I'm quite proud of how it came out.
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Ah but see, you have done it. Expressing that you cannot is indeed a feeling, and in these 30 lines we see the frustration and humor of that inability...see it's a paradox of sorts.
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An interesting approach to the contest Well done and thank you for your entry x
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