Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

The winds that carry me

There's a sheet of paper
with my life
in words

blowing softly

taking my voice
to places unknown;

without reason...

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • Charity Ann
    March 13, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Funny how God directs our lives isn't it? I love the simple way you communicate this truth. My favorite line, "taking my voice to places unknown." Thanks for sharing.


  • BellaD
    March 3, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    How beautiful this and wonderful depth in just 20 words. Nicely done! The sheet of paper could be a story? a poem? Lovely imagery of it "blowing softly" and traveling on the wind "to places unknown" Great job!


  • dustookie2
    March 3, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Oh this is making me feel reflective ...great introduction takes me right there words lines on paper.....this is life and we live it where it leads who knows.Thank you for the experience of reading this post. Good luck in the contest.....bookmarking.


  • Perfectly Imperfect
    March 3, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is a really nice piece of writing, such expression captured in few words Well done and thanks for entering x


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 3, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    beautifully written with such a softness hat made me smile.it captures alot well done with this mommy

1 - 5 of 5