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Haiku

Gentle glowing moon
nestled on a bed of clouds
sings it's lulaby

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Saw the most gorgeous moon resting on clouds low in the sky for all to view the other day. It was nice- wish I could communicate it it's true glory.

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  • penman gold member
    September 13, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Such a great haiku. So very well done. Love the background. Thank you for sharing.

  • hose30
    April 11, 2008
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    I couldnt have said it better. Created a nice picture in my mind.Truly magnificent.


  • Candy6
    March 5, 2008
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    Nice haiku.


  • MyDecember
    March 3, 2008
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    cute, but that background is really annoying


    • duana
      March 3, 2008
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      I am going to try to find a better background. Hope this hasn't biased you against my poem, lol. Duana


  • melphleg gold member
    March 3, 2008

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    Wish I could have seen it. This certainly hints at it glowing and creates a nice picture in my mind.


  • copypastedelete
    March 3, 2008
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    nice.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 3, 2008
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    A beautiful Haiku.
    Enjoyed reading.

    I hope you are well.

    Mark

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