bitter, no sweet
by david aue
Taste of life is bitter, glitter and glam.
Waste of life is frustrating, people slam.
Chaste in life, living clean freak folly.
Life is life there is no end.
Sustainability questioned.
Progress trend? Any answers?
Life no end, simply being,
causing destruction,
human isolation.
Bitterness looking like
destruction, joined
in union.
In a list
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Are you
are you married, no good me neither, lets get married, LOL hahaha just kidding i just fell in love with this poem best i've seen all day keep on going, hope that wasnt to forward, hope your the joking tipe
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haha thanks for the compliment lol, im single but in australia.and yeah love a good joke. lets get married! lol
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REALY ;)
omg this is the happiest day of my like he pruposed,(well i did but he said YES) SHAZAM
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thank you for the changes it should fit perfectly
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THank you
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hey thanks for the pointers, i have done a few changes, and i hope you like. let me know if you think it may need further alterations
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Awesome write!
"life no end
simply being
causing destruction
human isolation"
I likez that part
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