Feelings
(Filter)
Through
Bruised
Openings
Into new hearts
Embrace through that love you
Believe in your
“Weakness”
Believe your heart
Author notes
20 words
A contest entry
- 20 Words by Perfectly Imperfect.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you really think
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wow. this poem is so strong but so short!
good luck! -
Excellent
What a great use of 10 words. Sad, but great. Best of luck in the contest.
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the words express sadness and pain with beautifully gripping imagery. it is so strong well done my beautiful lilac butterfly
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This is beautiful, I really like what you've expressed
Thank you for entering and well done x
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