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Inflicted

Political remedies
       flavor prisons anger.
Timid fevers haunt
       plastering vengeance.

Visions torment
       plants imaginations seed.
Vexations reality
       fades into life.


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  • enitsirhC
    June 23, 2008

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    I love this!
    I especially love the form..
    Alternating 2 and 3 word lines.

    Your diction is really good

    Thank you so much for entering my contest!
    Good luck!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 3, 2008

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    this is a powerful write and the words really describe alot.you have summed so much with just 20 words well done and best of luck


  • Perfectly Imperfect
    March 3, 2008

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    This is really good, great topic, great imagery, summed up in merely 20 words Well done and thanks for entering x