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Alas, the music will cease, and Love will retreat.

I sidle up to
The sinuous one,
Leaving behind me
My leveled holder.

A platonic smile
Pregnant with craving.
Soft clasp of a hand,
A held back shudder.

The music now churn,
And my pith now flame.
I pull Love closer
To repressed desire.

My palm steels around
A careful turned arc.
My fingers wander.
I pray Love not note.

When the music ends,
I will release Love,
Corral a fresh tear,
Give a feigned smile.

A platonic smile,
Pregnant with craving.
I pray Love not note.
Oh, how I pray Love not note!

Author notes

Umm, there isn't much I can reveal about this except that it is about dancing with my one true love, who I can never express my feelings for. You take what you can get, ya know? Even the tiniest moments can be so monumental.

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  • logokitty
    April 16, 2008
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    hi

    nice poem


  • hihamburger
    March 10, 2008

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    I like this one. It doesn't matter if it is a lot or not it is still very very good.