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Bleeding lies

 

 

Gossip's yellow teeth spits venom,

foiling truth's pastel blooms;

Retards swallow juicy tales of deception -

phantom shadows of fact slither.

 

 

 

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20 words Prompt "Conspiracy Theory"

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  • Purush
    March 3, 2008
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    good

    so sharp
    words strech like arrows
    good
    all the best in the contest


  • Freestyle Bushido
    March 3, 2008
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    oh shit this is deep, I like this on alot!