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Poetry

The Poetry
Of the Earth
Of the people
Of the music

Every rock is like a mountain
Built so strong and sturdy
It holds magic and beauty
Hidden within
Like a person
So different and odd
But so beautiful and unique
It stands forever

Every word is like a chord
On a guitar
And when stringed together
The outcome is music so smooth
It feels like velvet
Soft to the touch
And it flows endlessly

Every note is like a song in itself
Speaking volumes
Telling of each person
And the souls inside
Spreading the feeling
Some are kind and lush
Others hard and harsh
Each is beautiful
In its own way
And anything and everything
Is poetry.

Author notes

Figured I'd make a poem that didn't rhyme that I actually liked. Hope you like it! Please comment!

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  • Emile
    March 25, 2008

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    Good

    The descriptive wording and the great imagery bring this piece to life. Your word choices are clever, descriptive, and imaginative. Your words took flight and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination and poetic soul.