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Mysterious Voice

Mysterious Voice

poetry
uttered
by
that
voice
from
upon
high
in
the
rose-coloured
softest
clouds
and
i
struggle
among
ever
stronger
dark
winds
merely
to
hear
and
capture
soundless words
mouthed 
by so many others 

A contest entry

Mysterious Voice

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  • Randomly Beautiful
    March 8, 2008

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    I like the piece but wish you would have made the lines longer. It reads at such a fast pace; which perhaps was your intention. Thank you for the entry.


  • Blooming Poet
    March 6, 2008

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    OHH I liike Remember i=I I like the few words on each line, not all bunched together, nice effect. Very good. I have veery much enjoyed reading all your entries.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    March 3, 2008

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    Indeed amongst the throng of wailing and woes one may strain to see and hear that rose-softness in the quietude, but 'tis worth straining to listen to that soundless voice, ahhhh yes indeed, a sweet sound.