Of late, I have taken to buying
watches for around my wrist,
it is not so much that I want to
know the time of day but
more the knowing that time
will not pass by me without
me having some responsibility
for where I am when it flashes
before with my life,
is it just time passing me by
@ @
With every kiss,
With every look,
I ask for another moment with you.
Please tell me what you think
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Always your words and thoughts take my breath away!
Az
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No but thank you for the compliment on the poem.
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oohh..Scott..are you in love?
this is beautiul...I love the ending lines..they work so well with the first stanza..as always, I enjoy reading a new poem by you..
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Somebody once said we will never have less or more time; we now have all the time there is....... and somehow it rules us, doesn't it? The line "it is just time passing me by" adds a whole new meaning to this poem.... some great word play here, Scott - and then the last 3 lines points at "heart-time" - yes, so often that is all we ask.... Lovely, thought-provoking piece.
~ Nicolette
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