Stuffed in the back of a Cadi
his arm fits into my shoulder.
I'm asleep smiling at peace
The stars guide me home.
A day full of bright green
New movies, new towns, new people.
Hours and hours of pure joy.
So this is what trust is...
The rolling prairie hills soaked
in the enveloping moonlight
and I was off in my own world
I was floating. High on life.
A kiss. A simple kiss and nothing more.
Yet it was everything to me.
It was perfect and sweet
crystallizing my adolescence.
A contest entry
- Our Story by SincerelyMegan.
475 points, ended March 10, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Ah the first is kiss I presume?
Lovely.
Wonderful poem. I'd love to
give advice but this is nearly perfect!
Good luck.
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awh.. too cute.. I loved it! your magnificent! (sp?) haha but i love ya chica, ur brilliant also. such a good writer!
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Sorry I forgot these
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Capturing the moment of a first kiss....You have done it wonderfully and so sweetly. Actually makes me ache for my youth again and those days of innocence before it was all lost on a boy who lied and than left me lonely...... Wonderful job!!!! Best of luck...
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