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Today was a battle
For the mind, body and soul
With the fall of a hand
I'm left out in the cold
Even though wounds heal
It still leaves behind scars
They say love will set you free
Well, I'm still behind bars

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Written November 28th, 2003

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  • BeautiflDeadGrl
    February 28, 2004
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    holy shit girl...this is fucking good.....wow i know the feeling but he broke up with me so grrrrrrr still behind them..
    jess
    ps:believe


  • finding myself 84
    November 28, 2003
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    Wow... I don't know what to say this poem is AMAZING! I loved the last 3 lines.... they totally set me back. Nice work! *sonya*