Baby, take my hand.
Dance with me in the moonlight.
Darlin’ hold me close,
Never let me go.
Baby, kiss my lips.
Let me kiss away your fright.
Darlin’, hold me close.
Girl, you know, I love you so.
Baby, take my love.
It is yours for the taking.
Darlin’, don’t you know?
You mean the world to me.
Baby, take my heart.
Without you it keeps aching.
Darlin’, I’m all yours.
And forever I will be.
You have my full attention
As no other’s ever done.
My love, I need you more
Than this old world needs the sun.
I love you and I want you.
My love just will not end.
Always and forever,
I’ll be your lover and your friend.
Baby, take my hand.
Dance with me in the moonlight.
Darlin’, hold me close.
Never let me go.
Baby, I love you.
No other words sounded so right.
Darlin’, you’re the best.
Girl, you know, I love you so.
A contest entry
- Love Poems by LissaRox.
550 points, ended March 18, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Non Winning Pre-Write/End line Rhyme Only by piccola.
600 points, ended April 12, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romance.. (guys only) by Angelflower.
1340 points, ended May 27, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn your Green Trophies into Bronze, Silver or Gold by FloridaGatorQueen.
600 points, ended June 29, 2008, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is such a beautiful poem. It is so romantic. Brought a smile to my face. I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Oh this was just so sweet!
It moved along with a simple grace!
I loved the image that you created!
and the flow in your words
just let the reader feel your emotions when
you wrote this!! well done!
Best of luck!
Angel
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this is sweet and romantic thank you for your entry
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I especially like the last stanza. The word coice and flow of this poem is amazing. Great write!
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