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There's Just Something

There's just something when you look at me
And how you say my name
How you think and how you act
You don't take this as a game

There's just something in the way and
How you make me feel
It's the way I get those butterflies
That makes this so surreal

There's just something, you may not know it
Cuz I haven't told you in awhile
That I know the wait is worth it
Can you see it in the way I smile?

There's just something in the way you feel
When your arms are wrapped around me
How dangerously sweet your kiss is
There's no one I'd rather see

There's just something in the way you
Make me want to be different
And in the way you make me laugh
I know that you were heaven sent

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Written November 28th, 2003

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  • finding myself 84
    December 7, 2003
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    This was so well written! Beautiful work! I love poems that use repetition and you've done a great job! Keep it up! Also thanks so much for your wonderful comments on my poetry! It means a lot!*sonya*

  • Boycrazy813
    December 3, 2003
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    awww so cute!!! keep writin
    kitty


  • Jesica Smart
    November 28, 2003
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    aww I love this! I think i'm jelouse, i want someone like that! lol. this is cool "How dangerously sweet your kiss is" Good job!