There's no reason to live
No reason to fight
I can't see why
You would want me to try
To go on
There is no reason
Because you're no longer there
Just kill me
I knew, deep down
That I would never see you again
I was right
But there was still hope
Not anymore
Just kill me
Please
Somebody
Anbody...
Just kill me
Before I do it myself
Author notes
If my boyfriend were to die out there in the war, this would surely be my reaction
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Comments
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a boy friend in the war... this hits very close to
home my husband is serving his second tour in Iraq
this is funny that you picked this because my best
friend i desided that this is probibly what i would
want if i was to lose my husband i feel you here
great job
thank you so much for the entry
--kat
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