Heavenly bliss, courses through my veins.
Love you deliver, pure joy it maintains.
Power you give me, destroys any chains.
Lifting me up, forever devotion remains.
(C) Nichole A Dustin
3/6/2008
Author notes
Write four lines of rhyme, of love...Dedicated to the one true love of my life, thank you for everything you have pulled me through in life. You will forever be my heart and soul! I love you.
A contest entry
- 4 Lines With The Pretext Of Love by Vernal Bloom.
450 points, ended March 11, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*
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wow. this is lovely. i really like the line "Love you deliver, pure joy it maintains."
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Wonderful.
This is wonderful Nicole and I am so glad you posted it. I enjoyed reading this tonight especially before going to bed.
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good job
nice silver trophy you got there!
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This is very nice. Sweet and concise. I think I'll have a slice (lol). Really good job on this. Thanks for sharing it.
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Ah so sweet and true and as lovely as love itself is!
I thank you kindly for sharing this with us and wish you good luck in the contest 
~Massy~
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