A child's mind is made of glass...
Imagine how unnatural a kiss from her grandfather was...
She tried to run from his evil embrace,
but he tamed her, and scarred her innocence...
She still hasn't forgotten about how her body was broken,
and now, her tears could spell out her sorrow...
Author notes
Kitsune Kyuuketsuki
A contest entry
- ABUSE - looking for poems to be published :) by DramaQueen469.
550 points, ended October 25, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Show no mercy.
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Oh god, that is so unbelievably sad, especially for such a short poem. WELL DONE and thankyou for entering this piece.
~*~DramaQueen469~*~ -
an emotion that I can connect to it reminded me of a child who has been abused because we never forget those feelings
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Wow... a very somber, sobering write.
You set the tone from the very beginning with that impressive opening line.
What a terrible atrocity - and you wrote about it so well. I think you showed maturity, restraint, and composure with this - but also opened the door to a flood of emotions for your readers.
Well done. Thank you and good luck in the contest!
(I hope that this was not autobiographical).
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It is autobiographical.
Things happen, though, and I can't change it.
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oh my, I am so sorry. I hope in writing this you find solace.
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