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Egpytian Lover

Eyes that shine like amethyst jewels, just looking at you makes me want to drool.
Hair as golden as the sun, makes me want to stick my fingers in it and run.
Skin a beautiful tan, my gosh how much I love this man!
Your back was tattooed from a painful act of tradition, in order to help the Pharaoh's mission.
My darling tomb-keeper you mean the world to me, you make people shiver and make them flee.
Though other may think your crazy and insane, why I like you I just can't explain.
Collecting the three Egyptian god cards was your gain, in make up for the years you endured so much pain.
Honey the way you stick out your long tongue, got me so damn sprung, can't believing how your so young.
Oh imagining how fun it would be, if you were real so you can be with me, because just watching you is bringing me to my knees.
My cunning evil hottie, who is also very sexy and naughty.
From watching you for the first time I have finally had to discover, of my brand new sexy evil Egyptian lover.

Author notes

BlueMoon Goddess
Dedicated to Yami Marik from Yu-Gi-Oh! and the episode that inspired me to write this was episode 120 subbed version(japenese version)

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Comments


  • ShadowHex777
    March 27

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    hell yes

    you did a great job on this poem and i am a big fan of Yu-Gi-Oh!by the way please tell me your author name

  • Sachiro k-Saruto
    March 17

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    wow!!

    i used to watch yugioh a long time ago....my favorite was seto kaiba!!!! he was the bomb baby!!!! a hott rich guy, come on who wouldn't like him.

    i like the way that you put your emotion into this.....marik is pretty hott.

    and yes yugioh was one of those animes that i got obssessed with and ended up playing the card game myself.....four blue-eyes white dragons baby.....and all the god cards (lol, i think i'm a nerd....or something like that.....)

    sachiro

  • DakotaSonicSister
    March 13
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    Ooookkaayy.........

    Uh, that was good, but i didn't really like the end.....Still ur poem was good..
  • WoundedSoul
    March 3

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    This is a bit frightening... You did a good job describing him, but I was put off by lines 8, 10, and 11.