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butterflies

Butterflies are pretty
to just look at
and they are little bitty.
On the rose, they've sat.

They are delicate
and they could be colored blue.
But butterflies still
reminds you.

We are here for a while
when we see the butterfly
we begin to smile,
is free from strifes by fluttering.



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  • Candy6
    March 3, 2008
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    Nice

    Lovely poem.


  • Kelli Marie
    March 2, 2008

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    This is a lovely write about butterflies. I really like it. I like butterflies as well. Have you seen my border on my authors page?
    Kelli


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    March 2, 2008

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    This is a sweet poem
    Guess you really love nature as I do
    Hugs
    Julie xx x


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 2, 2008

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    This is very cute dear Thanks for sharing Keep up the excellent work sorry I couldn't read earlier was really busy and my computer needed maintenanced

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