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Small life

Popsicle sticks and rumored bliss
Oh how my life can be ruled with this
Days end with ruined singers
Nights begin with what non-sense lingers

Put together in a song of boredom
Is the duty of my life
To conquer and take
Love and hate
It is my word you have to face then

So do what life wills you
God or not
You're the show of others

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  • U.g.l.y.
    March 4, 2008

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    Mixed rhyme with free verse... not bad, though the rhyme is a turn down, it looks forced. Also, the last stanza looks incomplete... others what?